Summary of my Feedback

1st draft, front cover from rebeccamilesmedia

+ Good choice of picture
+ Layout is nice and simple
- needs more colour
- more articles to be advertise

Screenshot of my contents page second draft from rebeccamilesmedia

+ unique layout
+ good colour scheme
- blank space
- add contact information

Double page spread screenshot from rebeccamilesmedia

+ nice vibrant colours
+ nice use of magazine features
- add website link based around 'behind the scenes'